My term paper

[Melissa]

Hi, I just wanted to see what you all think of my paper I am turning in for school. It's on equality for gays an lesbians.

[ChristopherSays]

Hey Melissa...

When is your paper due? I noticed a typographical error. First paragraph, seventh sentence reads "It shouldn't play any part of one's options on there life...." I believe you want to use the possesive "their" in this sentence.

You may want to research a gentleman by the name of Bayard Rustin. He played a pivotal role in the fight for equality and is too often overlooked when it comes to both the Civil Rights Movement and the Gay Rights Movement, which some would argue are one in the same.

Perhaps that's an idea for a paper...proving that the Gay Rights Movement is part of the on-going battle for Civil Rights; civil equality.

Good luck!

Christopher

[Melissa]

Thanks so much, I actually went in and changed a bunch of stuff in my paper. I wish I would have gotton this sooner, but actually that paper was for our mid-term so the final draft will be due in two weeks. I will definatly research the person you gave me though.

ChristopherSays said:

Hey Melissa...

When is your paper due? I noticed a typographical error. First paragraph, seventh sentence reads "It shouldn't play any part of one's options on there life...." I believe you want to use the possesive "their" in this sentence.

You may want to research a gentleman by the name of Bayard Rustin. He played a pivotal role in the fight for equality and is too often overlooked when it comes to both the Civil Rights Movement and the Gay Rights Movement, which some would argue are one in the same.

Perhaps that's an idea for a paper...proving that the Gay Rights Movement is part of the on-going battle for Civil Rights; civil equality.

Good luck!

Christopher